Thursday, 22 May 2014

big write

Friday the 16th of May

There, pinned in the beam of my flashlight, I finally saw it. The haunting, foul smelling, beast of Odrin. An old, bedraggled teddy bear? I laughed. My deep, bellowing laugh echoed around, down and back up the slimy cave. I suddenly stopped. A sub-zero, skin biting wind started to swirl around me. I'm glad you've arrived, Johan. A high pitched voice screeched through my mind.

Friday the 23rd of May

I cringed as the screeching got louder. Nevertheless, I heaved the towering doors open and soldiered on. Mangee's howling and wailing faded into the background. Despite the fact I was sweating like crazy, my teeth couldn't stop their dreadful chattering. "You have no chance against me, Jake." A moaning voice echoed through my mind. "Yeah right." I muttered under my breath. Gritting my teeth, I plunged into the darkness...

3 comments:

  1. Asher I cannot wait to read your first published book (and enjoy 60% of the proceeds, mums right ;))

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  2. you should do your profile thingy-ma-bobby so people know who you are....

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